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Thank you for concerning me regarding the internship program.

Thank you for your concern for my interest in(towards?) internship program.

Other answer:

Kim:
They're both awful and make you sound like a complete moron. It's quite clear that you don't know what "concern" means.

Try: "Thank you for considering my application for the internship program."

James:
Thank you for considering me for the internship program.
turley:
Thank you for considering me for the internship program.
Connor:
2nd
Gert:
Thank you for considering me for the internship program.
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Neither, both very bad grammar.

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